Here are three drafts of the crowd piece from Here We Go. I don’t usually redo my work this many times, but this piece is an important one- a wordless spread that is at the climax of the book.
I didn’t even finish this first one because of issues with the ink I was using.
This second try looks good in color copies and especially on the computer screen…
but this last version is my favorite in terms of composition and it’s consistency with the other artwork for the book.